Posted by: Revanchist
« on: January 02, 2017, 08:56:07 PM »A multi million high-budget adaptation of The Glove of Darth Vader, just for the reaction it would cause alone.
That would be hilarious.
That would be hilarious.
Posted by: Singularity
« on: January 02, 2017, 07:59:10 PM »A multi million high-budget adaptation of The Glove of Darth Vader, just for the reaction it would cause alone.
Posted by: kucsidave
« on: December 17, 2016, 09:22:37 AM »it was a rush job, but the rest of the 4 movie series doesn't quite follow the same pathok, if we count R1, then 1 movie down. but how do you know it from the next 3?
and the fact that a movie is not a rush job doesn't mean it is good
Posted by: DarthRevansRevenge
« on: December 17, 2016, 08:09:03 AM »it was a rush job, but the rest of the 4 movie series doesn't quite follow the same path
Posted by: kucsidave
« on: December 17, 2016, 06:55:39 AM »The base story would be good, but it is kinda TFA faulty, meaning it is a ripoff. Too much EU stuff in it.
I would rather see something not seen before. something entirely new or at least only using minimal eu basis. The way I did with mine. 1 character and an altered version of a battle appeared, all the other is something new or based on something else, but with a new way of implementing it, altering it a bunch.
though I admit, it would be quite entertaining.
I would rather see something not seen before. something entirely new or at least only using minimal eu basis. The way I did with mine. 1 character and an altered version of a battle appeared, all the other is something new or based on something else, but with a new way of implementing it, altering it a bunch.
though I admit, it would be quite entertaining.
Posted by: DarthRevansRevenge
« on: December 16, 2016, 12:48:35 PM »so, tell me what you think, but here is mine.
following the battle of endor, we see a 20 year period of war between the New Republic, Imperial Remnant, the Sith, and the Warlords. after 15 years, it seems to calm down, and the new republic settles down with 50% of the galaxy and Coruscant, and not much changes for the next 5 years.
episode 7: Shadow of the Vong.
starts with a new conflict with the new republic and Sander Delvardus's EA, when Luke Skywalker receives a premonition of a galaxy of darkness. distressed, he tells Leia, Han, Mara Jade(his wife for 15 years), and the 4 children, Jacen and Jaina(18 year old twins), Anakin(15), and Ben(13). while there, they all receive a message that an outer rim patrol had just been obliterated. when they go to investigate, the run into the Vong, a living technology wielding alien species with a massive army. as they escape, they return to Coruscant to tell the Jedi and the Republic. when they get back, they find out that a massive invasion has happened to the entire galaxy: the Yuuzhan Vong are pushing on a massive front. after planning an attack and receiving news of an enormous fleet preparing to attack the IR. joining in an alliance with them, the so called Galactic Alliance attacks, and sacrifices the Lusankya to destroy the massive capital ship at the middle of the enemy fleet. the fleet is obliterated, the Vong retreat temporarily, and the galaxy celebrates on their victory, but knowing the Vong will return, the Galactic alliance grows to include all of the warlords an indepent factions as well, an Viscount is commissioned, signaling the beginning of the counter offensive.
so, again, tell me what you think. if you think it's not good, i'm telling you now it was a rush job, but I can fix it later
following the battle of endor, we see a 20 year period of war between the New Republic, Imperial Remnant, the Sith, and the Warlords. after 15 years, it seems to calm down, and the new republic settles down with 50% of the galaxy and Coruscant, and not much changes for the next 5 years.
episode 7: Shadow of the Vong.
starts with a new conflict with the new republic and Sander Delvardus's EA, when Luke Skywalker receives a premonition of a galaxy of darkness. distressed, he tells Leia, Han, Mara Jade(his wife for 15 years), and the 4 children, Jacen and Jaina(18 year old twins), Anakin(15), and Ben(13). while there, they all receive a message that an outer rim patrol had just been obliterated. when they go to investigate, the run into the Vong, a living technology wielding alien species with a massive army. as they escape, they return to Coruscant to tell the Jedi and the Republic. when they get back, they find out that a massive invasion has happened to the entire galaxy: the Yuuzhan Vong are pushing on a massive front. after planning an attack and receiving news of an enormous fleet preparing to attack the IR. joining in an alliance with them, the so called Galactic Alliance attacks, and sacrifices the Lusankya to destroy the massive capital ship at the middle of the enemy fleet. the fleet is obliterated, the Vong retreat temporarily, and the galaxy celebrates on their victory, but knowing the Vong will return, the Galactic alliance grows to include all of the warlords an indepent factions as well, an Viscount is commissioned, signaling the beginning of the counter offensive.
so, again, tell me what you think. if you think it's not good, i'm telling you now it was a rush job, but I can fix it later
Posted by: Illidan Stormrage
« on: December 06, 2016, 08:24:23 PM »Ahhhhhh I've waited to tell you all my idea.
CAPTION
THE GALAXY IS IN CHAOS. Following the death of the Emperor and Darth Vader the Empire has fragmented with Inquistors and Rouge Admirals laying claim to territory. However the New Republic has manage to take back most core worlds and are rulers of the galaxy. Luke Skywalker has vanish in hopes of establishing the Jedi order away form the War. However dark forces are moving and preparing to make a power grab. After Recieveing a mysterious message the star destroyer *Demolition* is caught in a battle with Former imperial-turned-warlord Admiral Trigit and Forces of The NR. Fearing the worst the Captain has order his Elite Storm troopers to investigate what is going down on the planet ilum so they can flee.
We open up with a three way battle between the IR, A imperial Warlord, and a NR fleet. We find a lamba shuttle has been shot down with a squad of Elite stormtroopers, and a smuggler who was arrested for theft of a tie bomber. They crash land on a icy planet(Ilum) and are forced to hunker in a cave. Inside they find a old imperial communications station. Once inside they find a data tape left by Grand Admiral Thrawn. Thrawn talks about a army of inquisitors which are preparing to use a ancient force weapon to bully his forces into sub mission. they already have control of three imperial warlord fleets and are preparing to launch all out assault. Thrawn states the only warlords who have align with him are Moff Kaine and Teradoc brothers and he is sending this to this station in hopes any imperials are willing to help. the imperials find a aquiten that had been left by the fleeing imperial forces of the station and set off to find "The lost Grand Admiral". They regroup with the *Demolition* to hunt for Thrawn. We learn later as the Captain brief his stormtroopers that the NR is executing Imperial civilians in the streets as a intimidation tactic and many of their families are aboard the *demolition*. As they Fly to the location of the trans mission they find Abandon Imperial weapons Facility or so they think. The Encounter Royal Guards and after a brief skirmish learn that they are guardian old imperial WMDs and Light sabers. they unite with the Royal guards and proceed to journey to another location after seeing another transmission sayin that they need to journey to meet Trueten Teradoc at centares . once there they meet teradoc and see his fleet of CVSDs and he takes them to Thrawn but they are attack by inquisitors who have built a force battle station where they channel a special force energy and Yavin 4. The Station itself drains a planets force energy to increase the force in the inquisitors. They Eventually infiltrate this station using Thrawn's cloaking technology and teradocs CVsDs and sabotage the darksiders weapon while stealing a valuable Datacron.
In the end we see Thrawn Talking with The Smuggler and the Storm troopers and we learn that it detail the last location of the jedi order and they must find it since Thrawn theorizes luke might know how to stop force users better than he does
CAPTION
THE GALAXY IS IN CHAOS. Following the death of the Emperor and Darth Vader the Empire has fragmented with Inquistors and Rouge Admirals laying claim to territory. However the New Republic has manage to take back most core worlds and are rulers of the galaxy. Luke Skywalker has vanish in hopes of establishing the Jedi order away form the War. However dark forces are moving and preparing to make a power grab. After Recieveing a mysterious message the star destroyer *Demolition* is caught in a battle with Former imperial-turned-warlord Admiral Trigit and Forces of The NR. Fearing the worst the Captain has order his Elite Storm troopers to investigate what is going down on the planet ilum so they can flee.
We open up with a three way battle between the IR, A imperial Warlord, and a NR fleet. We find a lamba shuttle has been shot down with a squad of Elite stormtroopers, and a smuggler who was arrested for theft of a tie bomber. They crash land on a icy planet(Ilum) and are forced to hunker in a cave. Inside they find a old imperial communications station. Once inside they find a data tape left by Grand Admiral Thrawn. Thrawn talks about a army of inquisitors which are preparing to use a ancient force weapon to bully his forces into sub mission. they already have control of three imperial warlord fleets and are preparing to launch all out assault. Thrawn states the only warlords who have align with him are Moff Kaine and Teradoc brothers and he is sending this to this station in hopes any imperials are willing to help. the imperials find a aquiten that had been left by the fleeing imperial forces of the station and set off to find "The lost Grand Admiral". They regroup with the *Demolition* to hunt for Thrawn. We learn later as the Captain brief his stormtroopers that the NR is executing Imperial civilians in the streets as a intimidation tactic and many of their families are aboard the *demolition*. As they Fly to the location of the trans mission they find Abandon Imperial weapons Facility or so they think. The Encounter Royal Guards and after a brief skirmish learn that they are guardian old imperial WMDs and Light sabers. they unite with the Royal guards and proceed to journey to another location after seeing another transmission sayin that they need to journey to meet Trueten Teradoc at centares . once there they meet teradoc and see his fleet of CVSDs and he takes them to Thrawn but they are attack by inquisitors who have built a force battle station where they channel a special force energy and Yavin 4. The Station itself drains a planets force energy to increase the force in the inquisitors. They Eventually infiltrate this station using Thrawn's cloaking technology and teradocs CVsDs and sabotage the darksiders weapon while stealing a valuable Datacron.
In the end we see Thrawn Talking with The Smuggler and the Storm troopers and we learn that it detail the last location of the jedi order and they must find it since Thrawn theorizes luke might know how to stop force users better than he does
Posted by: Mitthrawnuruodo
« on: December 05, 2016, 07:36:30 AM »A little different but its still the same premise of episode four in the terms of finding out there is a super weapon, being captured and taken aboard, having people come rescue you, and blowing it up (nearly). For me I would've kept the same cast and characters from TFA, and changed it to them fighting the first order with out any sort of super weapon, just with a massive fleet.
I'll admit I got lazy and threw in a super-weapon, as well as following some basic plot structure of Ep 4, however I felt that it could have worked because my version wasn't a Death Star 3 but intended to be a cheap thrown-together imitation, the best those guys could do with what they had. The thing about Ep 4, Ep 6, Ep 1, and Ep 7 is that they all rely on a final battle of insurmountable odds going in the antagonists' favour until the protagonists hit a single critical weak-spot. Sure, we've seen it before that many times, but it's a story-telling technique that is convenient and works. The problem with having a huge fleet is what you do with it: do you have it defeated by taking out its command? Do you have it defeated by being outnumbered? Do you have the fleet destroyed/crippled before it even enters battle?
Posted by: kucsidave
« on: December 05, 2016, 06:51:11 AM »While interesting isn't it unrealistic with the technology of Star Wars and probability to say that Thrawn could fight a shadow war for years with noone figuring out its the Empire?not really. coms and sensors can be jammed as the battle of Endor shows, ships can be stopped from jumping with immobilizer 418s and thrawn is such a tactical genius that he (and maybe 2 or 3 more guy in the EU) can pull such a thing of. Think of the black fleet as I said. it disappeared and haven't been found for a decade.
And the NR would not have even known about it if not for that plot bunny escapee. So no, it is not impossible. Very hard to accomplish, but not impossible.
Posted by: Ordinarygamer96
« on: December 04, 2016, 03:07:22 PM »Well, I would go at it in a very very different approach.
I would start by imperial fleets disappearing left and right black fleet style with no sources of indication where they went. Imperial planets abandoned, no sign of opposition in chokepoints. Nothing, nowhere, but star destroyer wrecks at a few places, heavily damages on outposts.
The investigation's conclusion: infighting between imperial groups. It culminates in finding an Executor class in pieces. The NR salvages the wreck and starts to rebuild it. They secure the galaxy in 5 years(the decreased time can e ruled out as the missing opposition in this case, yet still not as ridiculous as 1 year.)
Then it happens. The New Republic high command loses contact with a patrol. They send a fleet but they just go dark. The NR declares the sector off limits in precaution.
Then comes the disappearence of some mole miners. Then the canonized version of the battle for Sluis Van. And since thrawn is canon, he could pull the strings. He reunited most of the empire and pulled back to the unknown regions, regrouping an salvaging whatever he could, calling out for all who is loyal to the empire. The attack on Sluis Van is a success this time, and he captures a whole new republic fleet. The fleet of MC 80s are got a good use immediately. Posing as a New republic fleet under attack by imperial forces engages in a fake battle against an ISD and an Interdictor. When reinforcements arrive, the imperials does not retreat. The NR support fleet comes in range, and then... A whole imperial fleet pops up right on them, using a precision hyperspace jump with the gravity well of the interdictor.
The new republic fleet gets obliterated before they could report back. System after system falls with no info for years. And this is where we start episode 7. The NR is in fear and the Resistance could be those brave few whom would try to go after whatever kills their fleets. and by the end, trough sheer luck plot bunnies as ever they get to know that it is the empire, that thrawn leads the empire and there wouldn't be any superweapon. just super tactics. Oh, and Han would die, but in a much more dignified way. In the final battle of the movie where the heroes would try to run away with the info, they would be outgunned and couldn't jump because of an interdictor, and to save them, Han would ram his ship into it so the others could get away. So Han's death would at least mean something and not just die because why not. This would be a death fitting for him, and even his development in the original triology would mean something, culminating in this event.
What do you guys think?
While interesting isn't it unrealistic with the technology of Star Wars and probability to say that Thrawn could fight a shadow war for years with noone figuring out its the Empire?
Posted by: kucsidave
« on: December 04, 2016, 06:22:32 AM »Well, I would go at it in a very very different approach.
I would start by imperial fleets disappearing left and right black fleet style with no sources of indication where they went. Imperial planets abandoned, no sign of opposition in chokepoints. Nothing, nowhere, but star destroyer wrecks at a few places, heavily damages on outposts.
The investigation's conclusion: infighting between imperial groups. It culminates in finding an Executor class in pieces. The NR salvages the wreck and starts to rebuild it. They secure the galaxy in 5 years(the decreased time can e ruled out as the missing opposition in this case, yet still not as ridiculous as 1 year.)
Then it happens. The New Republic high command loses contact with a patrol. They send a fleet but they just go dark. The NR declares the sector off limits in precaution.
Then comes the disappearence of some mole miners. Then the canonized version of the battle for Sluis Van. And since thrawn is canon, he could pull the strings. He reunited most of the empire and pulled back to the unknown regions, regrouping an salvaging whatever he could, calling out for all who is loyal to the empire. The attack on Sluis Van is a success this time, and he captures a whole new republic fleet. The fleet of MC 80s are got a good use immediately. Posing as a New republic fleet under attack by imperial forces engages in a fake battle against an ISD and an Interdictor. When reinforcements arrive, the imperials does not retreat. The NR support fleet comes in range, and then... A whole imperial fleet pops up right on them, using a precision hyperspace jump with the gravity well of the interdictor.
The new republic fleet gets obliterated before they could report back. System after system falls with no info for years. And this is where we start episode 7. The NR is in fear and the Resistance could be those brave few whom would try to go after whatever kills their fleets. and by the end, trough sheer luck plot bunnies as ever they get to know that it is the empire, that thrawn leads the empire and there wouldn't be any superweapon. just super tactics. Oh, and Han would die, but in a much more dignified way. In the final battle of the movie where the heroes would try to run away with the info, they would be outgunned and couldn't jump because of an interdictor, and to save them, Han would ram his ship into it so the others could get away. So Han's death would at least mean something and not just die because why not. This would be a death fitting for him, and even his development in the original triology would mean something, culminating in this event.
What do you guys think?
I would start by imperial fleets disappearing left and right black fleet style with no sources of indication where they went. Imperial planets abandoned, no sign of opposition in chokepoints. Nothing, nowhere, but star destroyer wrecks at a few places, heavily damages on outposts.
The investigation's conclusion: infighting between imperial groups. It culminates in finding an Executor class in pieces. The NR salvages the wreck and starts to rebuild it. They secure the galaxy in 5 years(the decreased time can e ruled out as the missing opposition in this case, yet still not as ridiculous as 1 year.)
Then it happens. The New Republic high command loses contact with a patrol. They send a fleet but they just go dark. The NR declares the sector off limits in precaution.
Then comes the disappearence of some mole miners. Then the canonized version of the battle for Sluis Van. And since thrawn is canon, he could pull the strings. He reunited most of the empire and pulled back to the unknown regions, regrouping an salvaging whatever he could, calling out for all who is loyal to the empire. The attack on Sluis Van is a success this time, and he captures a whole new republic fleet. The fleet of MC 80s are got a good use immediately. Posing as a New republic fleet under attack by imperial forces engages in a fake battle against an ISD and an Interdictor. When reinforcements arrive, the imperials does not retreat. The NR support fleet comes in range, and then... A whole imperial fleet pops up right on them, using a precision hyperspace jump with the gravity well of the interdictor.
The new republic fleet gets obliterated before they could report back. System after system falls with no info for years. And this is where we start episode 7. The NR is in fear and the Resistance could be those brave few whom would try to go after whatever kills their fleets. and by the end, trough sheer luck plot bunnies as ever they get to know that it is the empire, that thrawn leads the empire and there wouldn't be any superweapon. just super tactics. Oh, and Han would die, but in a much more dignified way. In the final battle of the movie where the heroes would try to run away with the info, they would be outgunned and couldn't jump because of an interdictor, and to save them, Han would ram his ship into it so the others could get away. So Han's death would at least mean something and not just die because why not. This would be a death fitting for him, and even his development in the original triology would mean something, culminating in this event.
What do you guys think?
Posted by: Lord Xizer
« on: December 03, 2016, 09:47:43 PM »It would revolve around Jaina. Main focus would be the Unkown Regions. Supporting cast members like Jag and the Wraiths with a cameo by the old cast. Takes places after the Fate series so jaina's development and centralization to the plot allows for maximum CREATIVE FREEDOM, while still giving a nod to the old days and adventures.
Posted by: GreyStar
« on: December 03, 2016, 08:31:05 PM »Option A: They force me to get rid of the EU and remake Episode 4.
Everything's the same, except Kylo dies after getting shot down by a swarm of X-wings because he's actually competent in doing things, Rei barely is able to use the force, doesn't get 1 for 1 kills the entire movie with her blaster, and the Death Star replacement is a ship with a super laser on it, but is obviously weak. Also the Resurgence Class-SD is just a redesigned but slightly smaller ISD2. If they force me to keep Kylo alive, he force stasis both Finn and Rei but walks off to a transport due to being pushed back by X-Wings or such. And Finn and Rei both lose arms fighting Kylo. If they for whatever Goddamn reason force me to include a saber fight but tell me I can't get rid of anyone's arms, Kylo force pushes them into a wall and laughs, again, and again, and again. Also, no sub-space bullshit. And no Resistance either. Lastly replace Jakku with literally anything else, and make the scrapyard more than just Imperial tech, and Rei n Finn meet up with Han Solo working as a transporter / general for the NR instead as a smuggler looking for the Falcon, he still has the Falcon.
Option B: Reboot but doesn't have to be ANH.
Luke is watching over Jacen, Jania, Ben, and Anakin as they tell him the story of how they took down an Imperial Warlord in a covert commando mission, with a lot of flash backs.
Option C: I get to keep the EU.
A story about Jania Solo.
Everything's the same, except Kylo dies after getting shot down by a swarm of X-wings because he's actually competent in doing things, Rei barely is able to use the force, doesn't get 1 for 1 kills the entire movie with her blaster, and the Death Star replacement is a ship with a super laser on it, but is obviously weak. Also the Resurgence Class-SD is just a redesigned but slightly smaller ISD2. If they force me to keep Kylo alive, he force stasis both Finn and Rei but walks off to a transport due to being pushed back by X-Wings or such. And Finn and Rei both lose arms fighting Kylo. If they for whatever Goddamn reason force me to include a saber fight but tell me I can't get rid of anyone's arms, Kylo force pushes them into a wall and laughs, again, and again, and again. Also, no sub-space bullshit. And no Resistance either. Lastly replace Jakku with literally anything else, and make the scrapyard more than just Imperial tech, and Rei n Finn meet up with Han Solo working as a transporter / general for the NR instead as a smuggler looking for the Falcon, he still has the Falcon.
Option B: Reboot but doesn't have to be ANH.
Luke is watching over Jacen, Jania, Ben, and Anakin as they tell him the story of how they took down an Imperial Warlord in a covert commando mission, with a lot of flash backs.
Option C: I get to keep the EU.
A story about Jania Solo.
Posted by: Mr.Puerto
« on: December 03, 2016, 11:45:19 AM »A little different but its still the same premise of episode four in the terms of finding out there is a super weapon, being captured and taken aboard, having people come rescue you, and blowing it up (nearly). For me I would've kept the same cast and characters from TFA, and changed it to them fighting the first order with out any sort of super weapon, just with a massive fleet.
Posted by: tlmiller
« on: December 03, 2016, 12:41:44 AM »I would have just made it different from Episode IV. Pretty much anything would have been an improvement if it weren't just Episode IV, reboot.